Hi Lillie,
Thank you for entering this week’s 100 Word Challenge.
I enjoyed reading your story.
You have used the prompt well. I think the girls were right to be wary of a dog – especially a dog that they didn’t know.
To improve your writing you might try looking at different ways of starting a sentence. For example try using a “HOW” starter….Carefully he …. Slowly she sauntered….
I look forward to reading more adventures from you during the year.
Hi Lillie,
Thank you for entering this week’s 100 Word Challenge.
I enjoyed reading your story.
You have used the prompt well. I think the girls were right to be wary of a dog – especially a dog that they didn’t know.
To improve your writing you might try looking at different ways of starting a sentence. For example try using a “HOW” starter….Carefully he …. Slowly she sauntered….
I look forward to reading more adventures from you during the year.
Mrs Boyce @ Team 100 WC
Cork, Ireland
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