This is a very exciting start. Please finish it off on Monday. Also add speech marks and details of who is speaking and how as the last sentence is very confusing.
E.g.
“ROAR!”
“Don’t let it get away,” Lord Nulth screamed angrily.
This is a good start, Keanan.
It’s not very long at the moment but you have some good, descriptive details. Read and check through what you’ve done so far too, making sure that punctuation is where you’d like it to be.
This is a very exciting start. Please finish it off on Monday. Also add speech marks and details of who is speaking and how as the last sentence is very confusing.
E.g.
“ROAR!”
“Don’t let it get away,” Lord Nulth screamed angrily.
This is a good start, Keanan.
It’s not very long at the moment but you have some good, descriptive details. Read and check through what you’ve done so far too, making sure that punctuation is where you’d like it to be.
Keep up the good work!