Hi Chelsea,
Oh my what sad events! You’ve made Lord Nulth even more evil.
I liked some of the vocabulary you have used; erupt, mystical, snatched. As a reader, I really wanted more of a storyline. You could have achieved this by including more detail and descriptions of characters actions and feelings. Well done on entering the challenge this week.
Miss P (Team 100WC)
Australia
Hi Chelsea,
Oh my what sad events! You’ve made Lord Nulth even more evil.
I liked some of the vocabulary you have used; erupt, mystical, snatched. As a reader, I really wanted more of a storyline. You could have achieved this by including more detail and descriptions of characters actions and feelings. Well done on entering the challenge this week.
Miss P (Team 100WC)
Australia
Good description Chelsea but I would also like more of a story. REMEMBER CAPITAL LETTERS AT THE BEGINNING OF YOUR SENTENCES!
That is such a good story!