Hi Chase and Chelsea Loved the fact you wrote this as a diary entry – have a look at the sentence so I am writing in you ….. it doesn’t quite make sense. Loved the word thrilled rather than pleased. Well done – Mrs. Wheller
What a great idea to write a diary entry. Can you think of a word other than scared that may make more impact?
Thank you
Really good xx
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Hi Chase and Chelsea
Loved the fact you wrote this as a diary entry – have a look at the sentence so I am writing in you ….. it doesn’t quite make sense. Loved the word thrilled rather than pleased.
Well done – Mrs. Wheller
What a great idea to write a diary entry. Can you think of a word other than scared that may make more impact?
Thank you
Really good xx