Megan,
I loved your poem. I could see by the previous post that “thought” should have been “fought.” I would suggest that maybe you use a smaller font so that you can format your poem so that it looks a bit more like a poem. Generally, a poem is published so that the lines coincide with the spacing and lines on the paper; this makes the rhythm and meter evident. Keep up the GREAT work!
Well done Megan, good effort made on this. Did you forget the spelling of fought that we discussed?
Mrs Wheller
Well done Megan, very moving. Remember that you do not have a capital letter after a comma.
Megan,
I loved your poem. I could see by the previous post that “thought” should have been “fought.” I would suggest that maybe you use a smaller font so that you can format your poem so that it looks a bit more like a poem. Generally, a poem is published so that the lines coincide with the spacing and lines on the paper; this makes the rhythm and meter evident. Keep up the GREAT work!