Lovely layout boys, black then red really makes it stand out from the others. Good effort made on this poem. Look again at the line who knows could not of been me… does this make sense – could have another word been used instead?
Mrs Wheller
Hi guys,
I admire you for trying to express your feelings about Remembrance Day in poetry and for linking your poem with the well known Remembrance Day poem. The presentation is very effective and encourages the audience to read it. Rhyming is hard sometimes isn’t it? Just remember it still needs to make sense.
Keep writing and sharing,
Mary (Team 100WC)
Australia
I really like it, it’s amazing
Lovely layout boys, black then red really makes it stand out from the others. Good effort made on this poem. Look again at the line who knows could not of been me… does this make sense – could have another word been used instead?
Mrs Wheller
It couldn’t of been me
I love this poem. I should read it could not have been me but other than that an excellent 100wc.
Thanks
Hi guys,
I admire you for trying to express your feelings about Remembrance Day in poetry and for linking your poem with the well known Remembrance Day poem. The presentation is very effective and encourages the audience to read it. Rhyming is hard sometimes isn’t it? Just remember it still needs to make sense.
Keep writing and sharing,
Mary (Team 100WC)
Australia
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