Well done Becky – lovely use of our service at school being used in your poem. Look at the line it’s over, say …… again it doesn’t quite read well.
Mrs. Wheller
What a thoughtful poem. I could tell that you had written from personal experience as you have some descriptive phrases, I particularly like ‘hold your poppy against your chest’.
The repetition of ‘remember’ in the final line and the use of ellipses is also a clever way of ending, without ending.
I love the fact that you have created a poem without trying to make it rhyme. As it is a poem use a capital letter at the beginning of each line even though it is not the beginning of a sentence.
I love that you have created a poem but not tried to make it rhyme. Use a capital letter at the beginning of each lineeven though it is not the beginning of a sentence.
Well done Becky – lovely use of our service at school being used in your poem. Look at the line it’s over, say …… again it doesn’t quite read well.
Mrs. Wheller
What a thoughtful poem. I could tell that you had written from personal experience as you have some descriptive phrases, I particularly like ‘hold your poppy against your chest’.
The repetition of ‘remember’ in the final line and the use of ellipses is also a clever way of ending, without ending.
Miss T team 100wc
I love the fact that you have created a poem without trying to make it rhyme. As it is a poem use a capital letter at the beginning of each line even though it is not the beginning of a sentence.
I love that you have created a poem but not tried to make it rhyme. Use a capital letter at the beginning of each lineeven though it is not the beginning of a sentence.
thanks for our lovely comments
thanks for our lovely comments
That’s really good Becky