blinding

5 Responses to blinding

1. vgutmann says:

   October 10, 2014 at 3:34 pm

   Where is the 100wc prompt? A good start to a story although there are a few spelling mistakes. Blurrier and anything.
2. Kathy @ Team 100WC, Portland, OR, USA says:

   October 10, 2014 at 5:52 pm

   I like the way you told the story about the main character’s vision problems, and getting it looked at promptly. Just keep an eye on your spelling and then your story will be even better! Otherwise, nice writing.
3. duttm says:

   November 3, 2014 at 10:02 am

   Thanks
4. marfr1 says:

   November 3, 2014 at 10:03 am

   I need to put commas and puckuashon
5. walsa says:

   November 4, 2014 at 10:21 am

   I like the story

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