Well done Antoine. There is some great description and vocabulary in you 100wc. Make sure you read through your writing or get a friend to read through to check it makes sense as there a a couple of words missing in some sentences. It will also help with commas e.g. I’ve been neglected, bullied and even isolated.
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Well done Antoine. There is some great description and vocabulary in you 100wc. Make sure you read through your writing or get a friend to read through to check it makes sense as there a a couple of words missing in some sentences. It will also help with commas e.g. I’ve been neglected, bullied and even isolated.