Well done Lillie, a good effort made, how did it feel when this miracle happened. You could have given more description of how the vision looked with the cloudy effect. Have a read through again and see where you could have added a comma or two! Mrs. Wheller
Well done Lillie, a good effort made, how did it feel when this miracle happened. You could have given more description of how the vision looked with the cloudy effect. Have a read through again and see where you could have added a comma or two! Mrs. Wheller
Thank you I would try to put more description next time