Becky and Chelsea, I really like some of your extra details such as ‘licking your chops’ and giving information explaining what your character was dreaming about.
Keep it up!
Great story with fantastic description. Well done! Remember to use speech marks for , “Coming!”.
Thanks for commenting on our lovely story we miss you Mr duffinx
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Becky and Chelsea, I really like some of your extra details such as ‘licking your chops’ and giving information explaining what your character was dreaming about.
Keep it up!
Great story with fantastic description. Well done! Remember to use speech marks for , “Coming!”.
Thanks for commenting on our lovely story we miss you Mr duffinx