flying to africa

Posted on February 6, 2015 by Deleted User
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4 Responses to flying to africa

  1. ratth says:
    February 7, 2015 at 5:47 pm

    well done

  2. vgutmann says:
    February 8, 2015 at 6:15 pm

    I love the story opening Lana, it’s a great idea to start your writing using a flashback. Some great vocabulary as well. The punctuation needs correcting in places, an adult will help you to correct it on Monday. Did your nan make it out alive?

  3. ratth says:
    February 15, 2015 at 12:18 pm

    It is a great story opening Lana, I see you have started useing a flashback.

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