the HYENA

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  1. vgutmann says:

    You forgot ‘sandwich’! There is some good description and use of conjunctions. However, there are a lot of spelling mistakes and problems with punctuation. We will go through the work first thing on Monday so an adult will go through it with you and help to correct it.

  2. ratth says:

    I have corrected my work Mrs Guttmann

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