The hungry Hyena

Posted on February 6, 2015 by Deleted User
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3 Responses to The hungry Hyena

  1. ratth says:
    February 7, 2015 at 5:50 pm

    well done Josh that is very good AMAZING
    from heather hollys sister

  2. vgutmann says:
    February 8, 2015 at 7:03 pm

    Excellent use of similes Josh, this story is very surreal! There are some commas missing and some in the wrong place. See if you can correct them on Monday morning.

  3. joshie says:
    February 9, 2015 at 9:13 am

    Corrected

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