Great use of adjectives and adverbs, especially ‘angrily stomped’ and ‘slowly fell’. Read through it again, or get a friend to read through, some parts don’t make sense and some parts are missing punctuation. See if you can correct it on Monday morning.
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Great use of adjectives and adverbs, especially ‘angrily stomped’ and ‘slowly fell’. Read through it again, or get a friend to read through, some parts don’t make sense and some parts are missing punctuation. See if you can correct it on Monday morning.