the new girl

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3 Responses to the new girl

  1. ratth says:

    well done it is very good

  2. vgutmann says:

    A good introduction to a story and I like your cliff-hanger ending. Go through and add all of the capital letters that are missing at the beginning of sentences and names.

  3. chris says:

    thank you and i will

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