Fantastic Racheal, I especially like the way you have described how you feel when you witness the crash. Remember to use ‘were’ not ‘was’ when there is more than one of them. E.g. They were alright.
I like it how you have put ” the dig accident ” in the colour red so then it is like danger. hi Racheal from holly year 6
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Fantastic Racheal, I especially like the way you have described how you feel when you witness the crash. Remember to use ‘were’ not ‘was’ when there is more than one of them. E.g. They were alright.
I like it how you have put ” the dig accident ” in the colour red so then it is like danger. hi Racheal from holly year 6