lillies story

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  1. vgutmann says:

    Brilliant Lillie. I love the way you have split the prompt and it still makes sense. Great description, especially the pitch black night. Can you think of a word to replace slimy?

  2. ratth says:

    hi lillie this is brilliant i love it all it is all so good.
    from heather (holly’s sister)

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