the blind maze

2 Responses to the blind maze

1. vgutmann says:

   January 23, 2015 at 11:43 pm

   Well done Chelsea. Great connectives and good punctuation where you have used speech or thoughts. Try to use some more ‘ly’ words to describe how he does things.
2. ratth says:

   January 24, 2015 at 5:56 pm

   hi Chelsea I like that you have used speech or thoughts.
   from heather (holly’s sister)

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