Well done Lana. This 100wc is very emotive. You have used some great descriptive words, I love viciously, peaceful and cautiously. Make sure you stay in the same tense all the way through. E.g. ‘saw water’ and ‘hugged them in despair’.
ok mrs guttman
hi lana i like it. it is good and you used descriptive words from heather(holly’s sister)
thankyou heather
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Well done Lana. This 100wc is very emotive. You have used some great descriptive words, I love viciously, peaceful and cautiously. Make sure you stay in the same tense all the way through. E.g. ‘saw water’ and ‘hugged them in despair’.
ok mrs guttman
hi lana i like it. it is good and you used descriptive words
from heather(holly’s sister)
thankyou heather