I love this story Rebecca! It would make a great children’s story. You have used loads of great adverbs and adjectives and thought of lots of different ways to say ‘said’. I’m really impressed. The punctuation needs a bit of attention, don’t forget to use commas, full stops, exclamation marks and question marks to mark the beginning and end of people speaking.
I love this story Rebecca! It would make a great children’s story. You have used loads of great adverbs and adjectives and thought of lots of different ways to say ‘said’. I’m really impressed. The punctuation needs a bit of attention, don’t forget to use commas, full stops, exclamation marks and question marks to mark the beginning and end of people speaking.