I LOVED this story. Exceptionally good writing, this showed your talent for engaging the reader. It was mature and used interesting phrases and the cliffhanger at the end left me wanting more. Fantastic! The best story I have read in quite a while. You should be very proud of yourself.
Loved the ‘from the surprise of the moonlight’ – super opener. An unusual story starter – very interesting reading, well done.
I LOVED this story. Exceptionally good writing, this showed your talent for engaging the reader. It was mature and used interesting phrases and the cliffhanger at the end left me wanting more. Fantastic! The best story I have read in quite a while. You should be very proud of yourself.