Thats a fantastic story! I like the direction you took with the story by deciding not to make it a scary story like most people did. Good use of speech marks and the rhetorical question.
I really enjoyed it. I liked the way you used ‘CRASH!’ to give the idea of what you would hear.
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Thats a fantastic story! I like the direction you took with the story by deciding not to make it a scary story like most people did. Good use of speech marks and the rhetorical question.
I really enjoyed it. I liked the way you used ‘CRASH!’ to give the idea of what you would hear.