Excellent descriptive writing girls. I love this story. You have also tried hard to use complex sentences although some are punctuated incorrectly. E.g. Suddenly, in the corner of his eye, he saw a box. He opened it…
I really like your story
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Excellent descriptive writing girls. I love this story. You have also tried hard to use complex sentences although some are punctuated incorrectly. E.g. Suddenly, in the corner of his eye, he saw a box. He opened it…
I really like your story