What a sad story! Good use of language and well done for remembering capital letters for the names of people and places. Make sure you also remember to use capital letters at the beginning of your sentences. You should also read through your story before you publish to check that all of your commas and full stops are in the right place.
What a sad story! Good use of language and well done for remembering capital letters for the names of people and places. Make sure you also remember to use capital letters at the beginning of your sentences. You should also read through your story before you publish to check that all of your commas and full stops are in the right place.