Well done Holly. I like the fact that you have chosen to write a factual report rather than a story. Good try at a drop in clause. Remember to check your spellings, I think you meant to write, ‘be careful’. Can you think of another word to replace ‘funny’ which is repeated in the last sentence?
Well done Holly. I like the fact that you have chosen to write a factual report rather than a story. Good try at a drop in clause. Remember to check your spellings, I think you meant to write, ‘be careful’. Can you think of another word to replace ‘funny’ which is repeated in the last sentence?