the amazing dangerous swimming pool

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5 Responses to the amazing dangerous swimming pool

  1. Mr. K says:

    I really enjoyed it!
    You did a splendid job.
    Do keep it up,
    Mr. K

  2. Landon says:

    very cool

  3. Landon says:

    very cool nice paragraph

  4. Ally says:

    Great job! I love how you used so many adjectives to describe different characters and events from your story. I also enjoyed how you wrote the size of the building, how you become the best swimmer in the world, and how long it took the people to complete the dangerous task. Keep up the good work!

  5. Sindy says:

    I also love swimming and can so much relate to your story! Keep up a great job. I really want to see another story about it!

    Best,
    Sindy (Team 100WC)
    Edinburgh, UK

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