the amazing firework display

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  1. Lauren says:

    I loved this! It is great how much you made me feel like I was there in only 100 words!

  2. Ally says:

    Great job on this writing! I like your adjectives, such as starry, bright white, and massive. You did an amazing job including examples of why you love bonfire night, and what you will do in the future on that day. That was an excellent use of the five 100 word challenge words!

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