Ellie story

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3 Responses to Ellie story

  1. samut2 says:

    I liked the way you used a starter one crazy night you need to use more commas.

  2. jonej says:

    I liked you fronted adverbel Ellie and you need more puntuation.

  3. islaf1 says:

    You need to check for spellings and punctuation. Also add full stops. I can’t wait to Read your next 100wc.

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