Hi there,
What a great post this week! I love the way you have used the simile with Usain Bolt, what a great comparison. You have included some interesting ideas that have made your story action-packed. Well done with using capital letters for names to show they are important. Thanks for a good read and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Hi there,
What a great post this week! I love the way you have used the simile with Usain Bolt, what a great comparison. You have included some interesting ideas that have made your story action-packed. Well done with using capital letters for names to show they are important. Thanks for a good read and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Sarah, Team 100wc