How gruesome boys! I’m quite pleased I wasn’t walking around the park that day! Next time make sure you don’t use apostrophes for plurals (more than one of something) So ‘sun flowers’ does not need an apostrophe. Other examples include; there are lots of pens on the desk; there are too many footballs on the playground.
How gruesome boys! I’m quite pleased I wasn’t walking around the park that day! Next time make sure you don’t use apostrophes for plurals (more than one of something) So ‘sun flowers’ does not need an apostrophe. Other examples include; there are lots of pens on the desk; there are too many footballs on the playground.
Your other punctuation is good. Well done.
Mr Haylock