My children love the park and slides as well. Well done for entering this week’s challenge. I did find your story a little difficult to read though, as you have not put in full stops and commas to help me. Make sure you use them on the computer just as you do in your books. Re-read your own writing at the end of your 100WC challenge. You can always add commas and full stops then if you’ve left any out.
My children love the park and slides as well. Well done for entering this week’s challenge. I did find your story a little difficult to read though, as you have not put in full stops and commas to help me. Make sure you use them on the computer just as you do in your books. Re-read your own writing at the end of your 100WC challenge. You can always add commas and full stops then if you’ve left any out.
Mr Haylock