Well done Lana and Billy. Great use of inverted commas and starting a new line for speech. Next time make sure speech starts with a capital letter and there is always a piece of punctuation before the closing inverted comma.
Good humour with the Minion speaking. Made me laugh!
I liked the idea of a minion changing colours and enjoyed reading your 100 word challenge. You have used inverted commas well in your speech. Well done Billy and Lana, keep up the good work.
Well done Lana and Billy. Great use of inverted commas and starting a new line for speech. Next time make sure speech starts with a capital letter and there is always a piece of punctuation before the closing inverted comma.
Good humour with the Minion speaking. Made me laugh!
Mr Haylock
Well done for setting out your speech accurately.
It was an amusing piece of writing – a good element of surprise when the minion started talking!
I liked the idea of a minion changing colours and enjoyed reading your 100 word challenge. You have used inverted commas well in your speech. Well done Billy and Lana, keep up the good work.
Thanks for all the praise