Good use of a rhetorical question and some great adjectives to describe the glacier. Please read through and change the bits that do not make sense, especially the book entry. You have made parts of it confusing in your attempt to include all of the words. Also, swan was not one of the required words, it was swam.
Good use of a rhetorical question and some great adjectives to describe the glacier. Please read through and change the bits that do not make sense, especially the book entry. You have made parts of it confusing in your attempt to include all of the words. Also, swan was not one of the required words, it was swam.
I liked your story. In your 2 sentence did you mean lake? you said leak. Also some capitalization errors but besides that I like your story. Great Job
I meant leak
Daniel, some good use of language. Read through your writing to check you keep your tenses the same. Would like to know what happens next?