A brilliant start to your poem. I especially like the adjectives that you have used. Try and finish it off on Monday. It should read, ‘It had lonely, sunny…’
This is lovely Trinity. You really set a magical scene. I love the way you’ve used the phrase ‘much to my surprise’. Next time move from listing what you could see to perhaps what things were happening or what you could hear.
A brilliant start to your poem. I especially like the adjectives that you have used. Try and finish it off on Monday. It should read, ‘It had lonely, sunny…’
This is lovely Trinity. You really set a magical scene. I love the way you’ve used the phrase ‘much to my surprise’. Next time move from listing what you could see to perhaps what things were happening or what you could hear.