Well done Oscar, a very humorous piece of writing. I definitely hope its not you for its tea! Next time make sure you start your sentences with a capital letter. (Hold down the shift key whilst pressing the letter) Also make sure every sentence ends with a piece of punctuation (!. or ?)
Oscar – I love this! I saw lions in the jungle last year, in South Africa. They are huge and they would definitely eat you! I like the way you talk to the reader. Well done. Next time you could add where the noise was coming from.
Well done Oscar, a very humorous piece of writing. I definitely hope its not you for its tea! Next time make sure you start your sentences with a capital letter. (Hold down the shift key whilst pressing the letter) Also make sure every sentence ends with a piece of punctuation (!. or ?)
nice finking.
oops I meant thinking.
Cool Oscar good sentences like your ideas
Oscar – I love this! I saw lions in the jungle last year, in South Africa. They are huge and they would definitely eat you! I like the way you talk to the reader. Well done. Next time you could add where the noise was coming from.