Well done Luca, good sentence punctuation for each of your 5 sentences. You only have 5 sentences so try to be a clever with your choice of words. I would combine lines 2 and 5, so it read “In the jungle there were stripey snakes.” This way you could write a whole new sentence about what the snakes did.
Well done Luca
lovely sentences Luca .from felicity.
Well done Luca, good sentence punctuation for each of your 5 sentences. You only have 5 sentences so try to be a clever with your choice of words. I would combine lines 2 and 5, so it read “In the jungle there were stripey snakes.” This way you could write a whole new sentence about what the snakes did.
I like your build up. Next time I’d like to know what the snake was doing rather than what it looked like as it could be poisionous!!! BE CAREFUL :0