A very exciting story Daniel. You’ve used some very good language. I especially like ‘havoc’ and ‘pounded hard’. Remember to stick to the same tense all the way through. Orders should be ordered.
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A very exciting story Daniel. You’ve used some very good language. I especially like ‘havoc’ and ‘pounded hard’.
Remember to stick to the same tense all the way through. Orders should be ordered.