PLANES 2015 TAREEQ AND ANTOINE

Posted on March 6, 2015 by Deleted User
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1 Response to PLANES 2015 TAREEQ AND ANTOINE

  1. vgutmann says:
    March 6, 2015 at 8:09 pm

    I like the information that you have added in brackets. Good use of commas to mark subordinate clauses. You don’t need a comma after ‘today was the day’.

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