This is very well punctuated, well done and I love your use of the word ‘politest’. You don’t need the comma after but.
This 100 word challenge made me laugh, Megan! I did not expect Winnie to create a stone couch! You have used some really great verbs throughout this story, such as “shush” and “demanded”. Keep up the creative work!
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This is very well punctuated, well done and I love your use of the word ‘politest’. You don’t need the comma after but.
This 100 word challenge made me laugh, Megan! I did not expect Winnie to create a stone couch! You have used some really great verbs throughout this story, such as “shush” and “demanded”. Keep up the creative work!