Hi Ruby, without doubt, this is my favourite story this week. I think you did a brilliant job with the picture prompt and your piece was just filled with beautiful imagery and vocabulary. In fact, I think I want to go to this special place. Then I like how you changed the tone with the ‘icy hand’ and described the kidnapping of the statues. Very well done. I’m going to recommend this piece for Showcase. Good luck!
i like that you added a lot of detail but the thing you did wrong was that you wrote where 2 times at the start of the 4th sentence.
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