oscar ssc 11

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5 Responses to oscar ssc 11

  1. phaylock says:

    Well done Oscar, a very humorous piece of writing. I definitely hope its not you for its tea! Next time make sure you start your sentences with a capital letter. (Hold down the shift key whilst pressing the letter) Also make sure every sentence ends with a piece of punctuation (!. or ?)

  2. pestf says:

    nice finking.

  3. pestf says:

    oops I meant thinking.

  4. djuio says:

    Cool Oscar good sentences like your ideas

  5. Mrs. Weeks says:

    Oscar – I love this! I saw lions in the jungle last year, in South Africa. They are huge and they would definitely eat you! I like the way you talk to the reader. Well done. Next time you could add where the noise was coming from.

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