taylor

Posted on January 23, 2015 by Deleted User
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  1. vgutmann says:
    January 23, 2015 at 10:53 pm

    This a good story with great connectives. Well done. However, you have no punctuation. You need to separate your writing into sentences with full stops. E.g. …went to a school in Swanley. He was my best friend…

    Also, where is the prompt?

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