Wow, very surreal! I like the main idea of your story, the way you switch tense also works well. We need to look at capital letters and punctuation. Remember to use capital letters for I, when talking about yourself, and at the beginning of sentences.
Your story has a very dream-like theme Chris; or perhaps that should be nightmare? It sounds like a rather spooky set of circumstances – who is the central character and why can’t they escape from the forest. It’s good to encourage the reader to imagine, but it’s also good to set the scene by describing the surroundings or characters. What words might you have used to describe the forest?
Well done though and keep rising to the Challenge.
Wow, very surreal! I like the main idea of your story, the way you switch tense also works well. We need to look at capital letters and punctuation. Remember to use capital letters for I, when talking about yourself, and at the beginning of sentences.
Your story has a very dream-like theme Chris; or perhaps that should be nightmare? It sounds like a rather spooky set of circumstances – who is the central character and why can’t they escape from the forest. It’s good to encourage the reader to imagine, but it’s also good to set the scene by describing the surroundings or characters. What words might you have used to describe the forest?
Well done though and keep rising to the Challenge.