Another great piece of descriptive writing Rebecca. I love your similes. Remember to use capital letters at the beginning of your sentence and you should use ‘were’ instead of ‘was’ when you are talking about two people not one. E.g. We were walking.
Another great piece of descriptive writing Rebecca. I love your similes. Remember to use capital letters at the beginning of your sentence and you should use ‘were’ instead of ‘was’ when you are talking about two people not one. E.g. We were walking.
thanks mrs gutmann I will use that information in my next piece of writing♥