Brilliant Antoine. Great use of ‘Edingly’ (Thanks Mr Haylock!). Very good description and personification of the sun. It is also very well punctuated. Well done. P.S. Cocoa Pops is a proper noun and needs capital letters.
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Brilliant Antoine. Great use of ‘Edingly’ (Thanks Mr Haylock!). Very good description and personification of the sun. It is also very well punctuated. Well done. P.S. Cocoa Pops is a proper noun and needs capital letters.