A great piece of descriptive writing Tareeq. Very good use of onomatopoeia. Check your punctuation though. If you can’t see where you went wrong ask me next Friday and I will go through it with you.
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A great piece of descriptive writing Tareeq. Very good use of onomatopoeia. Check your punctuation though. If you can’t see where you went wrong ask me next Friday and I will go through it with you.