Poor old Rudolph. I suppose everyone has to learn something new before getting good at it. I was left wondering what was going to happen at the end. Maybe you could use this as a starter for a longer Christmas story? Well done for taking part in the 100 Word Challenge this week.
Well punctuated speech and I like your cliff hanger at the end. His steamed home doesn’t make sense. Did you mean steamy?
Poor old Rudolph. I suppose everyone has to learn something new before getting good at it. I was left wondering what was going to happen at the end. Maybe you could use this as a starter for a longer Christmas story? Well done for taking part in the 100 Word Challenge this week.