What a great story and you did a nice job of writing. I love how you described the leaves as a “sea of green” and compared the china doll to a teddy bear – very creative! Keep up the good work writing on the 100WC.
Good use of ‘ly’ words to start your sentences. The first sentence should read; I’m terrified! Today I…
Comments are closed.
What a great story and you did a nice job of writing. I love how you described the leaves as a “sea of green” and compared the china doll to a teddy bear – very creative! Keep up the good work writing on the 100WC.
Good use of ‘ly’ words to start your sentences. The first sentence should read;
I’m terrified! Today I…