An unusual beginning to this weeks story Vinnie. I don’t usually count the words, but you have only used 60. I think you could have written a little more and made a really dramatic ending Keep writing.
Very good description, especially glossy and matt. Please finish this off on Monday and don’t forget capital letters for names.
OK Mrs Gutman
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An unusual beginning to this weeks story Vinnie. I don’t usually count the words, but you have only used 60. I think you could have written a little more and made a really dramatic ending Keep writing.
Very good description, especially glossy and matt. Please finish this off on Monday and don’t forget capital letters for names.
OK Mrs Gutman